I was walking in the park one Fall day and I saw a key. It didn’t look like a car key or a house key. It looked like it could be a key to a treasure chest! I was in Washington on the coast so I thought maybe it could have washed up and ended up in the grass. I thought that a pirate from a long time ago was in a shipwreck and he lost his treasure in the wreck and the key floated and washed up on shore. I think the pirate was sad because he lost his key to his treasure!
Hey Cayden great story! I hope you feel better.
Greetings from Australia Camden. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. I liked your reasoning that the key could be from a pirate chest, and also how the key came to be in that position. You explained this clearly for your readers. I could empathise with a pirate who lost his treasure! I can see the effort you have put into using sentences of different lengths. When you edit, remember to check that you haven’t used too many ‘and’s in one sentence. I enjoyed reading your writing.🙏😊